breathless...
An angel? A dream ?
how can i describe my first thought when i saw you.
Years of yearning passed by,
waiting for 'the moment'.
Alas, nature has its own ways,
deprived me of you,
kneeling by your grave,
tears flooding from my eyes,
a sharp pain, i feel, in my heart,
pain,i will never again feel.
Little did you know that I breathed,
because your breath was in the air...
An angel? A dream ?
how can i describe my first thought when i saw you.
Years of yearning passed by,
waiting for 'the moment'.
Alas, nature has its own ways,
deprived me of you,
kneeling by your grave,
tears flooding from my eyes,
a sharp pain, i feel, in my heart,
pain,i will never again feel.
Little did you know that I breathed,
because your breath was in the air...
posted by joel at 7:43 AM
2 Comments:
Little did you know that I breathed,
because your breath was in the air...
Poetic!!
charecterising the pain as "sharp", saying that its something tat u cant feel again... it can be viewed in different ways...
Poems are meant to perceived differently by different people, and this does it very simply.
And i was thinking about the novel irony.. the poem is titled "breathless" and the closing lines goes well with it.. Good one :)
its nice!!!... i could feel the emotions reading the poem.. hope you met your angel :-)
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